I was another pair of eager eyes in the audience, 'Clarison Isse Martiene' announced the anchor.
She took longer than others to enter the stage and this only grew my curiosity. Then when my eyes finally found her, I was dazzled. She was a little girl of five and her tiny fingers were wrapped around a glowing sword. From head to toe she wore neon lights and danced like an innocent firefly in darkness of cruel world.
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ohh how cute is that... I too wrote on the dance theme :)
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
i read yours too :) !
Deletethat was so sweet!!
ReplyDeletethanks Ankita :)
DeleteI like how the name of the girl is in complete contrast to the age of the girl!!!the name sounded like some veteran performer :p. :) :D
ReplyDeletei intentionally gave that name... seems it served the purpose :) ;) !
DeleteNice take on the prompt Crimson curls :) Such innocence!
ReplyDeletethanks A :)
DeleteAn innocent firefly.. nice comparison.. little girls in ballets exactly look like that :)
ReplyDeletethanks Shanmuga :)
DeleteSweet, and yet pessimistic.
ReplyDeletesometimes the truth sounds pessimistic! :)
DeleteAww! You've portrayed such a sweet image of her. Very well put in just 5 sentences.
ReplyDeleteaww... thanks Soumyaa ! :)
DeleteInnocent story with a sweet li'l girl. Nice :)
ReplyDeletethanks Anita :)
DeleteSweet, though pessimstic
ReplyDeleteWhat a name! And then appeared a cute little girl! Nice take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletehope the mission to give a contrasting name with respect to age is served ;) ! thanks !
DeleteThat must have been a dazzling sight!
ReplyDeletein my imagination, yes it was dazzling :) !
DeleteBrilliant.. Your take on the prompt is unusual and unique.. :D
ReplyDeletethanks Anusree :)
Deletesuperb narration,now following your blog
ReplyDeleteMy take The Lone Survivor
thanks for following ! :)
Deleteread yours too !
What a lovely way of describing the little girl, the picture is beautiful.
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