Wednesday, 25 June 2014

Little Innocent Firefly

       
  I was another pair of eager eyes in the audience, 'Clarison Isse Martiene' announced the anchor.
 She took longer than others to enter the stage and this only grew my curiosity. Then when my eyes finally found her, I was dazzled. She was a little girl of five and her tiny fingers were wrapped around a glowing sword. From head to toe she wore neon lights and danced like an innocent firefly in darkness of cruel world.


for 5 sentence fiction on dazzles

26 comments:

  1. ohh how cute is that... I too wrote on the dance theme :)

    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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  2. I like how the name of the girl is in complete contrast to the age of the girl!!!the name sounded like some veteran performer :p. :) :D

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    1. i intentionally gave that name... seems it served the purpose :) ;) !

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  3. Nice take on the prompt Crimson curls :) Such innocence!

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  4. An innocent firefly.. nice comparison.. little girls in ballets exactly look like that :)

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    1. sometimes the truth sounds pessimistic! :)

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  6. Aww! You've portrayed such a sweet image of her. Very well put in just 5 sentences.

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  7. Innocent story with a sweet li'l girl. Nice :)

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  8. What a name! And then appeared a cute little girl! Nice take on the prompt!

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    1. hope the mission to give a contrasting name with respect to age is served ;) ! thanks !

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  9. That must have been a dazzling sight!

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    1. in my imagination, yes it was dazzling :) !

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  10. Brilliant.. Your take on the prompt is unusual and unique.. :D

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  11. superb narration,now following your blog

    My take The Lone Survivor

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    1. thanks for following ! :)
      read yours too !

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  12. What a lovely way of describing the little girl, the picture is beautiful.

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